my dreams
at your doorstep,
dawn captures
first light on
your face,
sprinkling gold,
lo and behold,
lover's pass
petals unfurl
yearned desire,
jasmine white
decor the lure,
aromatic you
you a sapphire bright,
open your eyes
purity truth peace
caress your first sight,
my dreams replenish,
your eyes
black and white,
deep fervor inside.
23 comments:
Sanchi baby...how u cn u speak volumes wid less words...dis creation says...v beautiful!
BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLL
Wonderful words!
Love it Sancheeta! You are so gifted with words.
Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving. ~Kahlil Gibran
Beautiful words Sancheeta....loved it...
Simple and lyrical - loved it!
This is beautiful and truly written from your heart. I love how you blended each line into the next allowing for a true mental picture :)
Oh soul sis...how wonderful! Love indeed has so many faces as the song says...
I love how I'd come to your page after my own reflections and find here a balance to my thoughts in loving and being hopeful.
Oh dreams...I open my doors to you.
Thank you Sancheeta love :*
So much said with so few words....wonderful...!!!
This is really beautiful Sancheeta. You have painted the most delicate picture with your words...loved it!
Beautiful..your words create a rainbow of light....As always...XOXOXOXO
Hi Sancheeta,
Wonderful poem , so much Ecstasy in it.
Loved it.
Keep writing and weaving the magic of words to rule our hearts.
Sancheeta, Your poem speaks to us and shares your dream with us. Lovely composition...
My San,
as usual on waking up I surfed for FB and mails and 'Lo and behold'!your dreams came at the doorstep of my eyes!Like a 'jasmine' flower ,my petals unfurled and I found myself to be 'sapphire bright' and 'aromatic' too!Oh,all the 'black and white' was replaced by rainbow colours!....
Oh,what a fabulous piece of poetry!Your words are still humming in my mind!
-POSH
Lovely....!!
Deep thoughts are made to make a poem beautiful...
Really Deep fervor inside...
What to say you given a dream to us @ own doorstep...
NICE POST
Hi Sancheeta. Discovered you over at Bloggers network. Lovely words. I look forward to reading much more. Claire
I loved this! Nothing like waking up to the one you love. Seeing them smiling at you when you first open your eyes is pure bliss. Delicious words Sancheeta.
http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/08/lyric-fire-look-at-my-fabulous-life-episode-3-home-alone-with-vanessa-stone.html
Sancheeta,
Simple, Beautiful and filled with love and desire..
xoxox
jessica
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less words....deep impact...volumes said.....tats precisely wat i find in ur poems always...delightful read...:)
i thank all my friends heartily for your lovely sincere comments that inspire me to pen down my honest thoughts always.
very interesting ... mix of colors with fragrance. Hartley love to read.
Beautiful post!!!
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