Wednesday, June 15, 2011

you in me





you broke my self exile,
you evoke my retired brain,
i was walking in my silence,
you intrude love in loneliness again.


in the opening of a new day
 i come back to you before bed time.
 my heart opens to pour some love
 to connect your soul.
 i recognize myself in your existence,
 my non-existence finds a resistance.
 i adore myself. i adore you.
 i love you in your presence, in absence.
the ecstasy burn too deep, pain to relief.
 you open up your desires, 
i try out my freedom in your passionate wine. 
i am afraid, my every Blood Red,
in love with your breathing thread. each time.

 you arose me,
 i tear up my net in you and our symposium,
 in search of power and strength.
 in search of you.
 you are in me.
 you in eternity.


22 comments:

Avii said...

Awesome..!!!

alejandro guzman said...

The eternity of love

A

Rimly said...

You write such deep and sensuous poems Sancheeta. Such a pleasure reading them

Nava.K said...

great words sis and particular like the title "You In Me", am interpreting in my own imagination.
Making me miss my hubby now.

JIM said...

Sanchetta this may just be my favorite of all your poems. .. very sensuous and thought provoking.. really love your work.
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Harshal Patel said...

Wow....Great Wordings dee.... Running blood in me is also red but feeling you describe is such a way greatly love your poem. And I know you are always pour your love. Such a deep thoughts written........

IRFANUDDIN said...

So thought full..

every time you write, you just pour ur heart into it....and this time its so Sensuous, one can feel the words.

Alpana Jaiswal said...

Beautiful lines..very touching and sensual...Love is not something that happens on first sight, it happens when you start knowing each other and in turn end up needing each other, for every feeling, for every thought and for every moment.Keep writing..love the romance in the air..

Nitin said...

hey sancheeta....i have only 1 wrd for poets..Respect...cause m incapable of usin wrds so beautifuulyy...grt rhyme keep it up!!!!!

Louise said...

Just beautiful... x

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

Sancheeta ji,
Very nice love poetry...and feeling of "you in me" is the besic theme of most hindi poetries of ancient period.this is called advaitvad.i can compare this poetry to bhaktikalin hindi poetries...of Kabir,Jaysi,Meera and others.
Best of luck.
Hemant

Ravenmyth said...

Sancheeta..this is such a beautiful expression of Love. You weave this beautiful Dance that takes place with pure abandonment.

But to such levels of depth...

geetS said...

I am touched really very nice :)

David said...

Pssionate loving words at their best. You write poetry the way we all wish we could...with devotion, heart and desire!! Keep then coming!!

melissa said...

I feel it deeply and I feel that you wrote it for him...

And it's a passionate wanting... needing... and I just pray God heed this desire...

So you are sensitivity and passion embodied in one...

definitely loved it...:)

sulekkha said...

Love makes a poet of all of us and the poetry soothes the heart. Lovely poem Sancheeta, enjoyed reading it a lot.

charlie nitric said...

Hey Sancheeta -

You said, "i try out my freedom in your passionate wine." Super interesting line here Sancheeta. It's as if you want to dive in full-heart but you test the water out with the tips of your toes first. Passionate writer, you are. :)

Simran said...

Wonderful and so deep :)..

sHoNa said...

owesomeeeeee.....
so deep..
but nicely done.

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FAYE said...

I love how you write poems. It's with deep emotions and all. =) It's a great composition! =)

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