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faith in eternity,
faith to paint the infinity
faith to realize
love sterilized
your lips merged
into the deep breath of mine
hold me for ever
hold us together
let silence be our words
silence in touch spurs,
i arouse like a red,
red in your heart
red letter ,
my sweet heart,
18 may,
u remember?
the galaxy unknown,
yet the depth dearly known,
contemplate on our thoughts,
in star studded black sky,
silence sanity prone,
u are my amber
i remember
love me till the end
grip the lure, the dale
that i paint,
let silence meet
two musical soul,
mind and body in
silken threads
wish to sail.
transitional voyage,
sea blue to green ocean,
only SILENCE and YOU prevail.
14 comments:
That's what I loved most! Sensitivity expresses the silence!
'Only Silence and U prevail' ~ you are awesomely poetic..
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You already know how much I like your poems and this one did not disappoint.. really nicely written...
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I know you are such a intelligent and lovable poet dee...you just complete my poem http://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=238430719518261 as you promissed....I love you dee so nice of you........
but you know....
my love will love me always because We will never stop love even
if our breath will stop....
Our heart beating stop....
and our lives stop....
but we both are unstoppable to love..........
Even GOD can't stop us to love.......
You have used colors in your poem... and your thoughts were penned so well...but most of all, it is always your heart that speaks that makes your poem great...
I do believe that many things happen in silence...but it's something "serene" and "positive" my soul sister...
love you:*
Beautiful touching words, always a pleasure to read your post. Very nice!!
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I loved it. If life is a color, I'd paint it sea blue. Great expressive words. Keep writing such beautiful poems. Loved the style too. :)
What a beautiful poem, the joy of love comes so clearly out of your words
I love it...its a free flow emotion which find words in silence...
silence sometimes speak unspoken words itself...
awesome...Thanks for sharing this poem..
silence speaks so much....amazin lines...n loved the way u wrote it...wid diffrnt colours...amazin...:)
Beautiful poem. I love it's poetic flow and sensitive touch:)
Sancheeta, it's like that moment when you are facing your dearest and there is so much love to express that the words drop away and you are left with the beautiful silence of each other. You write with much passion and intensity. Loved it!
I love the sensitivity you write with
the galaxy unknown,
yet the depth dearly known,
contemplate on our thoughts,
in star studded black sky,
silence sanity prone,
u are my amber
i remember
I really love this stanza and always look forward to your postings
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silence has its own words, rejoice the silence, bear the silence, silence can be joy, it can be pain. silence can make you complete, silence can discontinue a strand that you thought you could complete. put your thoughts in silence. think what it has to say. live life accordingly. thanks to all for your comments:))
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