Monday, June 20, 2011

future an involuntary beam

life is always not easy. it is obvious that we all try too hard to coagulate with the constraints of our life to be happy, to make the path we walk on easy. we strive hard to restrain pain, though pain is inevitable in rough modes of life. we search our ways to make us worthy, to make us comfortable, knowing our priorities. we are always in constant search of a soulful mind. we are in constant search to know oneself better, more better, scooping out the best part of us, discovering and moderating our weaknesses to put life at its best. yesterday night i was involved with the thoughts of my soul-sis melissa, some lines instantly came in my mind. i was in pain. i wanted a relief. she gave me a way, i jotted down and poured my heart as a comment which i share it again in my blog with my readers

i want to snuggle under your thoughts
i want to cuddle in your lingering dots
if i am not mistaken, it's all an innocuous
dream, so i lay down my thoughts,
in your flowing stream, i 
FORGIVE and FORGET
i am susceptible to the past,
let future be an INVOLUNTARY BEAM.





16 comments:

GeetS said...

beautiful poetry with lots of pain hidden in it ...don't b sad dear..keep smiling :)

Alpana Jaiswal said...

People come and go, pain comes and goes. But so does joy. And if our hearts are closed because we don't want to suffer, they won't be open enough to recognize the joy as it flies by.You cannot live without pain..Sometimes the littlest thing in life changes something forever and there will be times when you wish you can go back to how things used to be but you just can't because things have changed so much.
Just like happiness and pain,both will come and go..loved your post.

melissa said...

Oh Sancheeta... I felt you already happy when we talk... subliming pain for a deeper cause like the happiness of other people is difficult at times but is worth the effort. To keep our faces away from ourselves, God holds our countenance up high to enable us to see that other people still exist. Go back to the center of your goals...LOVE soul sis...it's both a noun and a verb...

"Pain, I have realized, is beautiful only when one can rise from its depressing power."---by Francisco Icasiano

love you soul sis...

Ravenmyth said...

Alpana is right...life is a smorgasboard of experiences and relationships...always teaching...always calling us to heal and to grow.Is it easy...No..only when we move throught the pain, grieve all those losses can we start to see the joy on the other side...that Journey of the Ying and the Yang...calling you to wholeness..it is a lifetime of work..but there are reststops along the way..to feel the joy of the Heart opening to receive the Love you deserve....to build your strength to learn again.

IRFANUDDIN said...

well, its always good to leave the past n move ahead, focused on to your dream.....

Cheer up now...:))
irfan.

alejandro guzman said...

Be happier when the pain subsides. Love to you and yours
A

avii said...

Yo gal..!!!
Y cho chaddy Chaddy...???
Always be Happy Happy.. ;)
Foget about Phast.. and feel the Phresence.. ;)

Looved the Phost and the Phoem . . :D

Now give a biggy biggy Smile . . . :)

N J said...

i like it... i like the genuine emotions in it...

Simran said...

Emotions are well poured in your poetry..Don't get saddy be happy ,Sanchi :)))

Rimly said...

I think we all need pain to understand the value of ecstasy.It enriches us despite the agony. The secret is to accept it and move on without any bitterness and cynicism. Soulful Sancheeta.

JIM said...

Rimly is so right about needing the pain and it will come into each of our lives, how we handle it is the key to happiness, in my estimation...The beauty of your words is like a carpet ride though your soul


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Mari Sterling Wilbur said...

Beautiful words about something we all experience. I always love your posts!

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Finding One's Way said...

I feel you pain my love I pray things get better soon for you... Our hearts do heal and our pain goes away in time....
xoxo
Jessica

skargupta said...

The feeling in the poem is very true, very close to probably all of us.

Extremely nicely worded.

Our hope lies not in the pains of today or tomorrow but on that involuntary beam of future. The very fact that the future is involuntary & unseen makes it the most beautiful amongst the three. Let us try to decorate it colourfully, passionately.

fantacy in practicality said...

welcome everyone to the Involuntary beam. thanks to all my friends for your lovely heart felt comments. wish every life have a colorful passion filled fillings as a decor of life. love you all.