drifters at night come
and go, a look, a ride.
lanterns swing in a row
wind struck my node,
lights off the code.
deep dark blue
canvas painting you
shooting stars speak
war and warriors creep
the sword cuts so steep
the sword cuts so deep
breaking the silence
love, a leap.
true or false,
silly or lily,
trumpets noise,
thorned red rose,
dipped in melancholy.
void.
dreaming is a glue
you are stuck all through
stretching arms foil,
centric lovely hue.
hopes cascade to brook
love bubbles enamor the look
rantings slow down in pain
the war is over again.
waiting sun to rise
wanting love to be wise.
27 comments:
i want a night ride sometime soul sis... but not just to fill a void... i want it full... in every sense... not just a memory...
i feel you...
know what brought you there in the first place... love you much :*
Time takes it all whether you want it to or not, time takes it all. Time bares it away, and in the end there is only darkness. Sometimes we find others in that darkness, and sometimes we lose them there again.The stars only reach out to those who are willing to fly. The darkness only reaches out for those who the stars reject. After a while in the darkness you grow wings of loneliness that fly you farther and farther away...You don't need this Sancheeta,I never want to see darkness in your life,take a hold of yourself,there is much more to life..Its waiting for you,with open arms,reach out,and hold on to it..and then,u will see light.
Wow! Night ride.. love it! :)
So beautifully you expressed it with rhyme ..Lovely :)
Take care my sweet Sanchi :)
I think I'd take a torch next time.
Beautiful piece
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Lovely piece...Love and its false promises are often the same for awhile but darkness is fleeting while love endures. You possess too much passion for life to dwell in darkness. Grab that torch and embrace life and love.
Take care my friend!!!!
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yes i love the night ride.. but not alone for sure.. I also want love to be wise.. ;)
Night ride has many shades to enjoy. the topic 'night ride' is literally so thoughtful.. :)
I loved your night ride.. :)
short of words :D ....beautifully expressed :)
Too deep, really beautiful one! Don't know what to say........but I love the depth of your poems Sanchu!
I am eager to night ride but can't do anything.....Actually plate is ready to eat but can't eat right now.....Have to wait.....I don't know how can I control myself........
Such a nice poem.....Love it.
@meli: i pray your nightlife be filled with passion to taste the nectar of togetherness.
@Alps: everything is changing, changing very fast, need a hug to stabilize.
@simran: little princess, thank you so much for your words.
@Alejandro: a torch for me also, it's so dark that i can't find it for myself.
@david: i am on a journey of wisdom, to embrace love and life. but each night seems to be longer than the days......... cold and blue.
@jim: love you jim, for your appreciation each time, it gives me a lot of energy.
@monu: enjoy the night ride, alone and together. both ways it can be wonderful. wish you happiness always.
@geeta: thanks for your compliments.
@mohini: i try not to write too deep, but can't help. i am happy that you understand my depth.
@harshal: mere bhai, everytime i find your sprinkles fresh, dillogical. a smile for you:))
I want to take that night ride, full of passion and love. Beautiful Sancheeta. You are a very talented poet.
@Sancheeta dee : But I hadn't experienced like all of you that's why I sprinkles everytime...Once I will than Its okey for me.....but you know I know the love only by heart not physically......!!
I love a person to whom I can give my whole life......even she will not give me anything......Unconditinal love.
Beautiful and moving words with an equally captivating images. Loved your ride..
Not really keen about the night ride but love with trust and plenty of it.
Very nice, Sancheeta. Night often seems to be the time for warring with ourselves or others.
Wow! I love the imagery and the poetic voice you portray. Lovely work.
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I like this one! Night ride! =)
Beautiful piece =)
Hi Sancheeta --
Beautifully written. You will find love, warmth, happiness, and light. Never give up hope. :)
Such rhythmic prose. I loved the pace and cadence of this. So much said about love in a very poetic and mysterious way. Your pen is blessed to be held by you. :-)
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