looking through the window pane
the moonlight in pain,
sea-shore roars, the waves
thrust on sand, grieves dispatched
trifling memories intact
lonely nights format.
listen to the coconut leaves sing
under the silver light beam, exchange
love rings dancing flair,
kissing a mega beauty spin
under scorching sun, even when thunder
struck their promises cement
pillars of conviction, long run.
love me till the end,
let love, the only commitment
lullaby we sing, resonate till the end.
love you my love, love you for what you are,
for whom you are? a cry from my soul
my eyes can see crystal clear
drink the FERMENTED SWEETIE GRAPES from MY DIAMOND BOWL.
23 comments:
I really love your style of writing.. a whole different rhythm.
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contrasting soul sis... fermented yet sweet and both give flavors that satisfy a person... and it gives better as it age...
reminds me of a Bible passage (an introduction to Passion), "Can you drink the cup that I'm going to drink?"... and it signifies union with the Cup bearer...
yes, drink the cup... along with its bitter sweet taste...
love you sancheeta...
@jim: thank you Jim, i am happy that you liked my style.
@Meli: dear Meli, i was yesterday inspired by you, i thought why not i again fall in love with this sweet and sour fermentation. i poured down all my feelings my the DIAMOND BOWL, waiting for the drink up.
Woha..that was deep..and beautiful a description..would linger on mind for longtime!!
Alcina
@alincina: thank you for granting my words so thoughtful.
Nice! Drink for your diamond bowl...okay. I liked it a lot. And I must have drank about 15 Dr Peppers...lol
@ricky: drive safe, ricky. life is too precious, lol.
beautiful rhyming :)
Absolutely awesome Sancheeta! What a poetess you are.
Lovely words and I do feel more love after having a couple of fermented sweetie grapes.
@geeta: fell the feel the night that is flowing like a hero. thanks a lot for your appreciation.
@kirti: after a long time i see you here. my joy know no bounds.
Nava>k: your recipes are very much healthy and mouth watering, so the grapes, i share it with you. it is my pleasure.
Simply, admirable what you have done here. It is pleasing to
look you express from the heart and your clarity on this
significant content can be easily looked. Remarkable post
and will look forward to your future update.
This is what love and life is all about..sometime sweet and at times sour..you have portrayed it very beautifully...."When I say I love you. You say you don't deserve it. When I say I need you . You say I deserve someone better, When I say my life is better with you. You say I don't know any better. But when I kiss you, you say I love you, When I have to go, you say I need you. When I am with you, you know, that there is no better feeling then our love coming together and that is something we both deserve".....Keep on writing...sweetheart,and I am always with you.
It reads like the breath of a soft wind...caresses, intices and begs for another sip...loved it!
Hey What a great poem...Love it.....Sancheeta Dee you make my mouth watering Grapesssss.......I love grapes......And you hmmmmmmm....yummmm.....I want it.......So much lovely poem..........I love the poem and you both a lot.......
Love you my dee......!!
beauty tips and trick: thank you for your visit and your kind words.
i will be glad if i can attract you in my space again and again
@Alps: since i met you you have shown me the way to pave a different path, significant to my existence. thanks a lot for holding my hand wherever i go.
@raven: yes its the night, the moon, the wind, the coconut leaves that curve the sip, feelings indigenous to human beings.
@harshal: dear bro, i didn't know that you loved grapes so much. next time i will showcase some special grapes just for you, very sweet. love you a lot.
Deep and thought provoking !
Well expressed :)
@simran: welcome back little princess. happy to see you back. thanks for your lovely comments.
loved the taste of your fermented grapes.. the idea of serving it in d diamond bowl here is very thoughtful.. :D
the timing of words used for nature is simply impeccable.. :)
Hi Sancheeta -
Ahhh the twists and turns of love, and loving. Yet to love is necessary and awesome. Thank you. :)
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