desires stranded in the middle of the road 
hopes gallop the dreaming zone.
oxygen valued keeping me alive
silence persists, sound solace
may rest in peace.
moon in the mid dark,
half done, half gone.
sleepless nights
are still
so stubborn.
i walk into your room
shivering in cold
my blood turns blue
fearing the mystic jolt.
restrictions wagging,
nagging every spirit,
reality bite, the chord
strikes a painful drift.
my steps slow down
fragile in the ground.
answers i seek
for journey or defeat.

hopes gallop the dreaming zone.
oxygen valued keeping me alive
silence persists, sound solace
may rest in peace.
moon in the mid dark,
half done, half gone.
sleepless nights
are still
so stubborn.
i walk into your room
shivering in cold
my blood turns blue
fearing the mystic jolt.
restrictions wagging,
nagging every spirit,
reality bite, the chord
strikes a painful drift.
my steps slow down
fragile in the ground.
answers i seek
for journey or defeat.
but still do you?
a woman every part
i do not press the clue.
demented i hook
bleeding heart to death,
a battered still look,
if ever i fail.
at the slightly hinted flesh,
you just turned around,
hold me in your arms
an appeal the twilight witness.
ignite love flames burning in the windhush! hush! a rush in the blood
blue turns red, ah! what a defeat.
my journey just began,
a forehead kiss, performed
with full ceremony,
a blissful creativity release.
good night, my love, dream the heavenly gift.
20 comments:
He felt now that he was not simply close to her, but that he did not know where he ended and she began. ~Leo Tolstoy
This is what I felt after reading your poem...beautiful..and very touching.
Beautiful .I dono how come you get ideas to write poem like this ..thx for this one
ssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh so hot and lovely.......Yaar...Kyu mere jese bechlor ki vaat lagate ho aap log.......Ek bar shadi hone do jab feelings pata chalegi baad me dekhna me kesa mast likhunga.......Anyways nice one....So romantic and feel that you wrote from your heart.....
Lovely and sensitive
SO much of Love in these lines....
as usual Beautifully expressed thoughts ...:)
Beautiful. I don't know how to comment. So nice.
I am so glad I found your blog..I really enjoy your writings. You write with such passion of thought
Your words touch so many
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wow beautifully quoted love :)
Beautiful poem...you express your feeling nicely everytime..Loved it :D
Very attractive and well composed love poetry...full of emotions and love. and your word selection is appricciable again.
Beautiful expression of love! very deep words!
Touching and moving words. You have great skill at expressing your beautiful thoughts!!
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once emotions started flying, there was no halt at all.. it was so very in the flow that the attraction towards this poem increased & increased till the last word... I loved it & i mean it..really..
You are very good and I enjoyed reading this one. I wish that I possessed half of your poetry skills.
nothing to say sis..
you have already received many recognition for this poem.
I think ,you will be more confident about your "word selection" after reading those comments...
Never say never again....
so that, we can get the touch of heaven....
again and again....
after all things, EXPRESSIONs remain...
best two lines of this poem..
"my blood turns blue
fearing the mystic jolt"
the best love ever is that intimate union between two couples (i think, is that true sancheeta?) :P... there's so much happiness in store in your poem... relevance...sincerity... love... taking in and giving back... it's such a wonderful poem...it has stayed with me for days... i wish for this heavenly gift ;)
So eloquent and breathtaking. I am now following your blog-it's lovely. I hope you will follow mine also.
Regards, Mari
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This reminds me of my beautiful moments with my darling Cathy!really love between girls is so heavenly!I too have written many love-poems to her but have always shied away publishing them on an open platform like blogspot.
-Portia.
We cried in love and opened up,thus,
So well we were washed that it cleansed us!
-PORTIA
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