valobasha, ami soptorishir joggyer bani
parle jop koro
kokhono jadi dhyan vage
monete ghee dhele mon debo.
for my friends i translate it in english, though i do not claim to be authentic, i just try to put in the meaning somehow.
love, i am the prayer of a prophet
if u are willing, enchant the verses
if at all i do wake up from meditation
i will pour my heart to ignite your soul

12 comments:
It's too deep meaningful........just in four lines! I could understand a bit Bengali and Thanks for making in English too! Still the depth is yet to be understood!
Loved it!
Damn that is so deep and so wonderful you are a treasure
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Nice! short but meaningful.My Spirit has been refreshed
Much meaning in a few words, often words are wasted but not with this poem. Very nice!!
concise but it took on a lot of meaning... ignite...i wish...
Very deep thoughts.....Sancheeta dee you always write from heart...every word every sentence came from deep heart.....Very touchy lines written.....Love....Love.....Love.....!!!
Succinct yet deep in purpose… thank you for the translation Sancheeta.
~ Blessings
to me so much closer to god with the few words you have mentioned.
So much said with so few words....Gr8 done.....:))
Beautiful lines :)
Lovely deep lines - thanks for sharing it darling : )
Beautiful lines said by a person who has such a wonderful heart,I have always maintained that only a person with a beautiful soul van write so well..and love,life..the deeper you go into it,the more you will discover.
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