Wednesday, May 25, 2011

bondona






valobasha, ami soptorishir joggyer bani


parle jop koro


kokhono jadi dhyan vage


monete ghee dhele mon debo.



for my friends i translate it in english, though i do not claim to be authentic, i just try to put in the meaning somehow.


love, i am the prayer of a prophet

if u are willing, enchant the verses

if at all i do wake up from meditation

i will pour my heart to ignite your soul



12 comments:

Mohinee said...

It's too deep meaningful........just in four lines! I could understand a bit Bengali and Thanks for making in English too! Still the depth is yet to be understood!

Loved it!

JP Brandano Photography said...

Damn that is so deep and so wonderful you are a treasure

http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/05/importance-of-quality-of-light.html

Yunafhaye said...

Nice! short but meaningful.My Spirit has been refreshed

David said...

Much meaning in a few words, often words are wasted but not with this poem. Very nice!!

melissa said...

concise but it took on a lot of meaning... ignite...i wish...

Harshal Patel said...

Very deep thoughts.....Sancheeta dee you always write from heart...every word every sentence came from deep heart.....Very touchy lines written.....Love....Love.....Love.....!!!

Debra said...

Succinct yet deep in purpose… thank you for the translation Sancheeta.
~ Blessings

Nava.K said...

to me so much closer to god with the few words you have mentioned.

IRFANUDDIN said...

So much said with so few words....Gr8 done.....:))

Simran said...

Beautiful lines :)

Kriti said...

Lovely deep lines - thanks for sharing it darling : )

Alpana Jaiswal said...

Beautiful lines said by a person who has such a wonderful heart,I have always maintained that only a person with a beautiful soul van write so well..and love,life..the deeper you go into it,the more you will discover.