i dedicate this poem to my lovely friend ALPANA JAISWAL, who has always inspired me to write more in english. thank you my sister for editing my poem, thank you for giving me a scope to learn more.............
THE RED BEAK BIRD
my expressions are like the red beak bird
rare and vibrant in its vivid clip art
it cuts every thought that runs through your veins
absorbs the impulse, stimulates the red drain
the red drain binds its roots to contemplate,
committed i surrender my woes,
finding myself drenched in the red rain.
it sweeps away my hallow, sliding in the dead phase,
i fall into the love of your endearment reflecting phrase.
from chrysalis to butterfly...............
"METAMORPHOSIS OF NARCISSUS"
reflecting my own sigh to a
blooming purple flower is my subconscious mind.
my expressions are like the red big bird
shinning like a hero, dazzling star
in Heaven's Garden, angel's swing
all my crazy dotes slip into a diamond ring.
hold me forever, my charming island
enamor the beauty of red big bird
even when i lay rested in the green grave yard.
rare and vibrant in its vivid clip art
it cuts every thought that runs through your veins
absorbs the impulse, stimulates the red drain
the red drain binds its roots to contemplate,
committed i surrender my woes,
finding myself drenched in the red rain.
it sweeps away my hallow, sliding in the dead phase,
i fall into the love of your endearment reflecting phrase.
from chrysalis to butterfly...............
"METAMORPHOSIS OF NARCISSUS"
reflecting my own sigh to a
blooming purple flower is my subconscious mind.
my expressions are like the red big bird
shinning like a hero, dazzling star
in Heaven's Garden, angel's swing
all my crazy dotes slip into a diamond ring.
hold me forever, my charming island
enamor the beauty of red big bird
even when i lay rested in the green grave yard.
18 comments:
Hope is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul,
And sings the tune without the words, And never stops at all,And sweetest in the gale is heard;And sore must be the storm,That could abash the little bird,That kept so many warm.
–from "Hope is the thing with feathers" by Emily Dickinson
Beautiful Sancheeta,there is a lot of significance of a bird where life,love is concerned...and you have linked it all so beautifully...God bless you always,and keep writing...Thank you so much for this dedication,I will always remember it,and keep it close to me.
Hey Sancheeta its a such nice poem and you know the way of expression and your English mind blowing nice translation as I don't know the Bengali language...But in English I can understand it well such a nice writing....Good one.......Like it much.....If u can do make a poem on current corruption issue on Anna hazare I am also trying but I am not a poet so I can't.....
Superb poem Sancheeta...it's so beautiful.You linked every word so so beautifully....I like it :D
It is beautiful Sancheeta. The colors that you used, red, purple are so vibrant just like in life.
perfect lines
liked
Beautifully written,,,,,:)
lovely words and the attached pic with plenty of colours add more meaning.
@Alpana: hope is keeping us dream big and go beyond reality in pursuit of knowledge, knowledge in the form of art is keeping us warm.even in the coldest nights we feel strong, i feel i am the strength that can win any hurdle race. i thank GOD for letting the life lines of ours intersect at a certain point. i believe he has a purpose.
@harshal: the neptune hero, i am very happy and impressed that you want me to write on Anna Hazare. i will surely write on this topic. just give me some time.
@Aabhishek: your comments mean a lot. keep coming and my energy will get a boost.
@Rimly: i am amazed to see you on my blog again. believe me i love to read your posts and now you are here with me stimulating me to write more.
@Jidhu Jose: thanks a lot for your comments. waiting for the picture of Qatar rains.
@Irfanji: ur comments are encouraging.
@Nava Kishnan: this was your first visit. hope to see you again with your lovely comments. i searched for a vibrant colored bird and got it. the name of the bird is PARAKEET.
LINK:http://strangezoo.com/item/172463.html
Simple and Great poem! Thank you share with us.
wow... you had done it sancheeta... :)...piano, piano ;)...
"red" symbolize strong emotions... yes, vivid, vibrant... blood...and always associated with life...
i like the way you wrote it...:)...congratulations :)
Colored bird.
@isha, meli and Ginobig: thanks a lot for your lovely comments.
A brightly coloured rainbow of a poem, Sancheeta.Loved it.
lovely poem Sancheeta.. I was not aware of Metamorphosis Of Narcissus! but thanx for providing the link to catch it's meaning.. after going through it, I felt the intimacy & depth of this poem.. :)
@monu: thank you for going through the details. loved to see you share my space.
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