Friday, March 25, 2011

if not love, then why not love?

if not love, then why not love?

words linger ultrasonic sound of fate
attributes to the nuture of a soulful soul mate.
affections prepare to glare the field of feudality
feudality between solidarity and emotional vitality.

awaiting for the positive flare of voluminous connotation
i offer the sofisticated dilution of my perseverence.
i ballar in solace profound when you lift that every bounce.
heartily hold my every grace not to let it go restless.
u suck my unwanted despair to absorb me in your strenghten spear.
let the synergy blow off all the insecured hope in dismay.
pleasure me in your arms with the curves of longing lovely spray.
allow my touch to peacock blue, in your heart let my space go through.

still if its not love but only an emotional stride,
i love to let go the righteous deviation with pride.
i believe in the freedom feed from hypocrisy.
i bow my preference to my privileged love delicacy.
and thus, owe my reference to my unprecedent prophecy.



12 comments:

sulekkha said...

Love is such a beautiful topic to write on, no two people feel the same emotions and it's nice to read others thoughts on love. Lovely post, Sancheeta.

Simran said...

Wow!!
This is ''REMARKABLE ''.
Beautifully expressed :)
Hmmm...this impressed me and now I am your new follower..
Cheers,
Simran :)

fantacy in practicality said...

yes sulekha, u r right. for some love is heaven. love is complete. love is passion. but when love is incomplete, its a question, its desperate and aggression. may be black and blank. but again it follows the path in reverse for better, for love to be rediscovered and only to be loved.

fantacy in practicality said...

oh! Simran, u are a little princess. i loved to see you follow me. i loved ur comment. keep encouraging :)

Alpana Jaiswal said...

The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is to love and be loved in return.
~ From "Unforgettable with Love" by Natalie Cole
loved your poem...keep on writing..there are different kinds of love,and to it get in any form,feel blessed..

fantacy in practicality said...

u r right alpana. only that sometimes mind is rebellious.

Abhisek said...

Love sure is beautiful and you expressed it more beautifully......loved reading it.....even I am following you now :D

fantacy in practicality said...

thanks Aabhishek for encouraging my spirit.

Kriti said...

Fantastic work Sanchita - love the passion and depth in it and to be able to put it in a poetic form - admire that

fantacy in practicality said...

thanks kirti for dropping by and leaving behind the lovely comments. thanks a lot.

melissa said...

oh if we could just do that loving... then the world will be a perfect place to live in...

wonderful poem sancheeta... you wrote my favorite topic beautifully...

so motivated to love more :)...

fantacy in practicality said...

mellisa, thanks for dropping by for the first time. will love to see you again.