Sunday, February 13, 2011

lost



 a lonely path to d lonely senses
a smart look to d lonely world.

what if u gain, what if u drain
doesn't matter 'cause u r already drenched.

pretensions have engulfed my synthesis
u r one and only one in d distillation of rare specification.

breathe and don't gasp to our innovations.
lighter your soul and tighten your fold.

lost......all's lost
JUST d fossils remain.

hope u remain for it to unearth,
 and unearth d UPDATES crossing your heart.

10 comments:

Jidhu Jose said...

what if u gain, what if u drain
doesn't matter 'cause u r already drenched.




Nice One

Geeta Singh said...

y so lonely dear ...:hmm keep smiling:)

Alpana Jaiswal said...

How dreadful is the prospect of death, at the remotest distance! how the smallest apprehensions of it can pall the most gay, airy, and brisk spirits! even I, who thought I could have been merry in sight of my coffin, and drink a health with the sexton in my own grave, now tremble at the least envoy of the king of terrors. To see but the shaking of my glass makes me turn pale ... all the jollity of my humour and conversation is turned on a sudden into chagrin and melancholy, black as despair, and gloomy as the grave.WELLINS CALCOTT, Thoughts Moral and Divine
Beautifully written,and so very true..its one of the harsh realities of life,one has to face..

हेमंत कुमार ♠ Hemant Kumar said...

Heart touching.....

Finding One's Way said...

Sancheeta,

Sending you love across the oceans...
xoxo
Jessica

Abhisek Panda said...

It's one of the best poems by you.Beautifully written..it's excellent :D
When The Heart Speaks

melissa said...

i think we never lose our loved ones... not even death could mark that... we may lose our sentiments but the connection is always there... death's something that's completely vague for me... and it is hope that keeps my senses awake... i hope in the Lord... and nothing is ever lost with such hope... i await the mystery to unfold...

Rimly said...

Heart wrenching Sancheeta.

Monu Awalla said...

a power-pack connection of words.. u targeted the crucial points here.. very deep thoughts despite using few words.. marvelous :)

JIM said...

You have a very unique style and I really find it interesting...you touch our hearts


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